2011年4月27日 星期三

Comparing-1&2

There are two driver’s licenses. The following tips will tell you the feature of them.
The person on the right license is called Stephanie Brooks, the other is called Ann Friedman. First, both of their eye color is brown. The former’s hair is the same color as the later. The former is 53 kilograms. Similarly, the later is 53 kilograms. The date the former born was as same as the later. The only difference is their appearance. The former wears black shirt and the later wear white shirt. If nobody said they are different people, most of us would think they are same people.

6 則留言:

  1. 注意單複數..
    有用到很多不同的句法很好

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  2. The date the former born
    要有介係詞

    former跟latter不要用那麼多次
    然後是latter

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  3. 好少連接詞讓人覺得很像列點說明...


    不過還ok^^

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  4. 沒圖, 所以應該不能用左右 人家不知道你在講啥

    The date the former born +on

    The former wears black shirt and the later wear white shirt.

    只是講義印黑白的而已

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  5. The person on the right license is called Stephanie Brooks, the other is called Ann Friedman.-->加上連接詞 因為是兩個句子

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    你的單複數要注意一下~
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    其他沒有問題~~

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