2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an opinion 1

I oppose meeting people through online dating sites. First of all, you can’t tell who you are talking to for sure. Many of people online use different photos for their chatting rooms. Second, it is dangerous for everyone to go out with some people that you have never seen before. For many examples, many of people who go out with online pals would get hurt or feel disappointed after meeting them. Third, your personal information may be used illegally by other person online. They may do some harmful things for you. Due to these reasons, I don’t suppose people to make friends online.

5 則留言:

  1. tell 要有至少兩種東西分辨吧
    不然就只是有"告訴"的意思

    Many of people online ?? 這是什麼意思

    They may do some harmful things for you
    你要改成 They may do you something harm.

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  2. Many of people online use different photos for their chatting rooms. 這句很怪 而且用不同的照片會死嗎? 應該是要說用非本人的照片吧?
    for example加 many多餘
    還有小宇說的那句
    最後面suppose?
    你是國中單字沒背嗎?

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  3. Many of people好奇怪

    it is dangerous for EVERYONE to go out with some people that YOU have never seen before.
    *大寫那邊 主詞好像沒一致?

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  4. 李紹瑋真是毒舌-..-

    你的結論句有單字打錯了~~~

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