About my school life:
In senior high, the school and the homeroom teacher are very open-minded; they encourage students to participate lots of activities joyously. They are all enthusiastic to help students in needs and try to tell us how important other school activities are. Just like they say, we students all enjoy playing volleyball at school. Almost students in our school play volleyball and enjoy it. Besides, our school holds many contests about many ball every year. Each of them is a good experience and a good way to improve friendship between my classmates and I. As to school work, our English teachers always give the best learning way to improve our English, without they, my English won't improve so much in two years. With these classmates and teachers, I'm excited to go to school every day! I hope that I can get along with them well and have more joyful days for the rest of my high school life.
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回覆刪除時態要用對 都亂參雜在一起
回覆刪除單字的運用 如:joyfully
然後應該要分個幾段
內容再多一點 不要都只寫排球 應該還有其他值得你留戀的阿
然後你太少說到你課業方面的 要寫的確切一點 你學到什麼
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好像就是什麼都沒學到現在才練不起來
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