2011年4月20日 星期三

I like rainy days

I like rainy days. The following things will tell you why I like it and some benefits only when it is rainy day. First of all, the temperature will fall down if it rains. That will be a wonderful thing if the season is summer. Next,we students have to wear shoes to school every day. If the day we go to school is rainy day, we needn't to wear qualified shoes to school even if we wear slippers. Another reason is that I can think many things which I wouldn't care about as usual. The most important thing is that I can walk beside females and put up only an umbrella together. If there were no rainy days, how terrible it would be!
張貼者： 於

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  1. 小宇2011年4月27日 晚上11:12

    The following things will tell you why I like it
    will前面要有主詞 然後你前面是打 rainy days 後面怎變it

    some benefits only when it is rainy day
    文法錯了

    Another reason is that I can think many things which I wouldn't care about as usual
    不知道你要表達什麼??

    The most important thing is that I can walk beside females and put up only an umbrella together
    符合現實ㄇ? 如果別人拒絕= =

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  2. 李紹瑋2011年4月27日 晚上11:17

    things? reasons
    if the season is summer.. if it is in summer
    is 'a' rainy day
    needn't + VR
    even if we wear slippers? it doesnt make sense in both Engish and Chinese.
    'Another reason is that I can think many things which I wouldn't care about as usual.'
    I cant understand this one.

    No girls would walk with you if they read this.

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  3. 純嘉2011年4月27日 晚上11:28

    first of all, rainy dayS 應該不用+s

    雖然我懂你想表達什麼
    但是別人不一定看得懂
    文法要加強!

    最後那個跟女孩撐傘你也太異想天開

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  4. 匿名2011年4月27日 晚上11:39

    The following things will tell you why I like it and some benefits only when it is rainy day.
    Things後面加below比較好
    另外用females很怪 girls 比較好吧 只要是女性,你全都ok?

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  5. 勝閎2011年4月27日 晚上11:41

    we needn't to wear qualified shoes to school even if we wear slippers.

    We need not wear 吧 不然就是 don't need to wear 不會是你打的這樣 文法錯了哦!!!

    Another reason is that I can think many things which I wouldn't care about as usual.
    這是原因嗎?是的話many things是什麼? 怪怪的

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  6. 王巧雲2011年4月27日 晚上11:43

    why I like it ...why I like them

    The following things will tell you why I like it and some benefits only when it is rainy day...不知道怎麼下手改=ˇ=不過意思就是你接下來要說的理由會告訴我們為什麼你喜歡雨天還有"只會發生在雨天的好處"對吧?其實說不兩句可以分開寫哦!不然連在一起文法會怪怪的欸:)

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    if the season is summer....IN summer


    Next,we students have to wear shoes to school every day. If ..這兩句話可以用逗號直接當成一句阿:D

    Another reason is that I can think many things which I wouldn't care about as usual....什麼意思阿?


    如果事情晴天也可以撐洋傘阿XD

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  7. 應二甲022011年4月27日 晚上11:54

    I like it and some benefits only when it is rainy day
    ???????????????


    If the day we go to school is rainy day 後面的day可以不要吧?

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